在这首小令中，作者运用巧妙的写法，将写景、叙事、抒情三者紧密结合，表达对宫妃的深切同情。

“恨綿绵”“情默默”“冷清清”等叠词的运用，贴切地表达出深宫女子的哀怨之情。

程景初 醉太平　恨绵绵深宫怨女，情默默梦断羊车，冷清清长门寂寞长青芜。

日迟迟春风院宇，泪漫漫介破琅玕玉，闷淹淹散心出户闲凝伫，昏惨惨晚烟妆点雪模糊，淅零零洒梨花暮雨。

Tune: Drunk in Times of PeaceCheng JingchuThe endless grief weighs on her heart in palace deep;In silence she dreams of royal cab drawn by sheep.

Before the lonely gate grows green grass sad and drear;The setting sun lingers, only spring wind comes here.

Her streams of tears have specked the jadelike bamboo;Gloomy, she goes outdoors, having nothing to do.

She takes a stroll at leisure,And gazes on the smoky scene without pleasure.

Oh!

what she seesIs drizzling rain and evening breezeAnd petals falling from pear trees.

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